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		<title>Golden Garbage Dump</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 03:48:16 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>mr. Spec</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Last year, I needed to crank out another original one-hour sample for a potential rep. Fast. I already had the show&#8217;s basic premise, characters, arcs, and theme in mind&#8230;but I knew I wouldn&#8217;t have as much polish time once I pounded out the first draft as I&#8217;m used to. And (as I&#8217;ve mentioned before) those [...]]]></description>
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<p>Last year, I needed to crank out another original one-hour sample for a potential rep. Fast. I already had the show&#8217;s basic premise, characters, arcs, and theme in mind&#8230;but I knew I wouldn&#8217;t have as much polish time once I pounded out the first draft as I&#8217;m used to. And (as I&#8217;ve mentioned before) those rewrites are where I really find my scripts come alive.</p>
<p>So, once I hammered out that first draft, I opened up a special document where I&#8217;ve been stashing little pieces of awesome for close to a decade. Great stories I overheard, cool dialogue parted out from abandoned projects, unique characters I&#8217;d imagined but not utilized yet, etc. &#8230;it&#8217;s basically where I bury the babies I&#8217;m forced to kill &#8211; but plan on reanimating at the right moment.</p>
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<p>I call this document my Golden Garbage Dump.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a simple Final Draft file with a random assortment of the items I described above. But it&#8217;s proved invaluable time and time again. In this particular situation, I had a scene where a con man describes his admiration for &#8220;Ferris Bueller&#8217;s Day Off&#8221; to another criminal. It was originally part of a spec &#8220;Leverage&#8221; I was working on at the time &#8211; but the show didn&#8217;t spark *any* interest from potential reps and showrunners, so I took it out behind the barn and executed all forty pages.</p>
<p>But I had to keep that scene &#8211; it was just too much fun to write (and read). My new project was about the same world, so I did some tweaking and <i>voila</i> &#8211; the scene was recycled into something I could actually use while saving me a grip of time.</p>
<p>The point I&#8217;m trying to make is, Don&#8217;t ever feel like you have to kill a particular element because it&#8217;s part of a failed project. Allow yourself to mine that pile of trash before discarding it. You&#8217;ll thank yourself down the line.</p>
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		<title>It Has To Be Bad To Get Good</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jan 2010 14:00:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>mr. Spec</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;m a serial rewriter &#8211; when I&#8217;m in the middle of a script, I can&#8217;t stop myself from reading back over what I&#8217;ve accomplished in prior sessions and doing a little polish work. Of course, this means I&#8217;m rewriting all of my scenes multiple times before finishing the first draft. And it still sucks. Always. [...]]]></description>
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<p>I&#8217;m a serial rewriter &#8211; when I&#8217;m in the middle of a script, I can&#8217;t stop myself from reading back over what I&#8217;ve accomplished in prior sessions and doing a little polish work. Of course, this means I&#8217;m rewriting all of my scenes multiple times before finishing the first draft.</p>
<p>And it still sucks. Always.</p>
<p>This used to get me down because of all the work I&#8217;d put into that first draft. What I didn&#8217;t realize was that, despite it&#8217;s first drafty-ness, I&#8217;d done most of the heavy lifting. Which is to say I&#8217;d written everything down &#8211; front, middle, and end. Now, I can go about making it actually <i>good</i>.</p>
<p>Which is why I&#8217;m writing this post. Forget Hemingway, EVERY writer I&#8217;ve ever heard interviewed or spoken with directly has emphasized that the first draft is the first effort &#8211; and that it should never see the light of day. It&#8217;s quite simple to identify missteps when you have an entire story to contrast it against &#8211; not so much if you only have part of the whole and don&#8217;t know where you&#8217;re headed.</p>
<p>So I guess the long and short of this thought is: don&#8217;t be afraid to be bad. Because we all are. It&#8217;s how you work the rough shape that helps add a distinct voice and focus to the script you <i>will</i> show other folks. </p>
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		<title>Done Is The Engine Of More</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Nov 2009 19:09:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>mr. Spec</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I first came across this *brilliant* bit of inspiration on John Roger&#8217;s blog Kung Fu Monkey. It&#8217;s hanging in the writer&#8217;s room at &#8220;Leverage&#8221; and undoubtedly in many other places as well, but I&#8217;m not sure where it originally came from. That said, check out how motivating the stuff can be&#8230;&#8221;Done is the engine of [...]]]></description>
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<p>I first came across this *brilliant* bit of inspiration on John Roger&#8217;s blog <a href="http://kfmonkey.blogspot.com/">Kung Fu Monkey</a>. It&#8217;s hanging in the writer&#8217;s room at &#8220;Leverage&#8221; and undoubtedly in many other places as well, but I&#8217;m not sure where it originally came from.<span id="more-404"></span></p>
<p>That said, check out how motivating the stuff can be&#8230;&#8221;Done is the engine of more&#8221; gets my fingers on the keyboard more mornings than I&#8217;d care to admit. And my showrunner buddies think it&#8217;s genius. I hope it helps you, too.</p>
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		<title>The Query Letter That Worked</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Nov 2009 11:26:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Once you&#8217;re sure you&#8217;re ready, there are a number of ways to query an agent &#8211; the most powerful being The Referral (it&#8217;s so important, I&#8217;m capitalizing it!). There&#8217;s no better intro than having an established professional step up to the bat for you. But that&#8217;s not the type of query I&#8217;m writing about today. [...]]]></description>
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<p>Once you&#8217;re sure you&#8217;re ready, there are a number of ways to query an agent &#8211; the most powerful being The Referral (it&#8217;s so important, I&#8217;m capitalizing it!). There&#8217;s no better intro than having an established professional step up to the bat for you.</p>
<p>But that&#8217;s not the type of query I&#8217;m writing about today. I&#8217;m going to talk about a &#8220;blind&#8221; email query &#8211; which is to say an unsolicited request for a read.<br />
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This can be a controversial subject &#8211; <a href="http://complicationsensue.blogspot.com/2009/03/when-query.html">Alex Epstein raised the subject</a> with a former agent&#8217;s assistant and she dismissed the idea out of turn as futile and a waste of time.</p>
<p>Luckily, my &#8220;research&#8221; has proved otherwise. When I queried agents who&#8217;d never heard of me in mid 2008, I ended up being read at Endeavor, William Morris, ICM, UTA, and Gersh. For the few who don&#8217;t know these names, I&#8217;m talking about *serious* talent agencies with the largest TV departments in the world.</p>
<p>So how&#8217;d my email go? This is the gist of it:</p>
<p><em>NAME: Ari Agent<br />
SUBJECT: &#8220;NAME OF MY PROJECT&#8221;</p>
<p><em>Dear Ari,</p>
<p><em>My original pilot, &#8220;Project Name&#8221; has gotten great responses from everyone I&#8217;ve shown it to&#8230;including two network showrunners. I&#8217;m looking for representation and &#8211; having looked at your client list &#8211; feel like I&#8217;m exactly the type of client you&#8217;d be interested in.</p>
<p><em>I can send the pilot over immediately. I also have another one-hour pilot on my shelf in addition to a sharp spec episode of &#8220;Californication&#8221;.</p>
<p><em>I&#8217;ll leave it at that &#8211; have a great day!</p>
<p><em>Best regards,</p>
<p>mr. Obsession</em></p>
<p>And that&#8217;s all! Short and concise, I made a conscious effort to send them out early Thursday afternoon in hopes of winding up in the weekend read pile.</p>
<p>One thing to keep in mind: the percentage of responses to queries is crazy-low&#8230;maybe 20% if you&#8217;re very very very lucky. Don&#8217;t be discouraged by silence &#8211; you&#8217;ve lost nothing at all by trying. Hit them back in a few weeks again &#8211; I&#8217;ve gotten more than one read off persistence.</p>
<p>And be sure to keep a history of your queries. I tracked all of my submissions in a database program called <a href="a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B002O0H5B6?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=greentraveler-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=B002O0H5B6">Bento</a>. A lightweight version of the venerable DB program Filemaker, it allowed me to record (and track) the names and dates of the people I queried. I also had fields for response details, email addies, and the type of company.</p>
<p>Whether you use Bento or something else, be *sure* to track these communications. You never know when you might here from someone a few months from now. Ten years ago, I had friends who tracked all of their networking on 3&#215;5 cards. Technology allows for a much more efficient workflow now and there&#8217;s no reason not to have notes about everyone who could potentially help down the road.</p>
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		<title>Only Buy One Book</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 14:00:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;m not sure how many screenwriting books I&#8217;ve purchased/been given in the past decade. Dozens would be a conservative estimate but only a couple actually left an impression. The best thing I found about having this large library was their resellability &#8211; listed as a lot on Ebay, they sold quite quickly two years ago. [...]]]></description>
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<p>I&#8217;m not sure how many screenwriting books I&#8217;ve purchased/been given in the past decade. Dozens would be a conservative estimate but only a couple actually left an impression. The best thing I found about having this large library was their resellability &#8211; listed as a lot on Ebay, they sold quite quickly two years ago.<br />
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So when I began looking for a great book specifically on writing for TV, I wanted to maintain focus on what I was really trying to do &#8211; write something *great*. Not be fluent in a million different ways to attack structure.</p>
<p>So I limited my purchase to one book. I found a well-reviewed book by an author who&#8217;d actually been paid to do what he was writing about. And I treated it as gospel.</p>
<p>I choose <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0805080287?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=greentraveler-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=0805080287">&#8220;Crafty TV Writing&#8221;</a> by <a href="http://complicationsensue.blogspot.com/">Alex Epstein</a>. I read it straight through and then I&#8217;d re-read a chapter every morning before hitting Final Draft.</p>
<p>And, Wow! It really allowed me to focus on writing. There weren&#8217;t a million different possibilities in my head (&#8220;Should I go with the Syd Field&#8217;s idea or McKee&#8217;s?&#8221;) &#8211; there was always just one. Alex knows what he&#8217;s talking about, so I didn&#8217;t question his method &#8211; I just applied it to what I was doing.</p>
<p>The pilot that came out of this routine ended up getting the attention of a major TV agent, an equally impressive manager, and the showrunners of a network series I came close to staffing on shortly thereafter. I attribute this directly to de-cluttering my mind and removing distractions from my routine. I highly recommend it to any writer looking for an escape hatch from an endless search for the &#8220;best&#8221; way to write something.</p>
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		<title>Unknowing Mentors</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 04:26:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh, how I envy Drew Goddard. First he had Joss Whedon as a mentor and then he bounced under J.J. Abrams&#8217; wing for a couple of years. You think this guy knows how to write yet? Mentors are crucial in any business but they&#8217;re almost essential in a closed society like TV writing &#8211; the [...]]]></description>
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<p>Oh, how I envy Drew Goddard. First he had Joss Whedon as a mentor and then he bounced under J.J. Abrams&#8217; wing for a couple of years. You think this guy knows how to write yet?</p>
<p>Mentors are crucial in any business but they&#8217;re almost essential in a closed society like TV writing &#8211; the more experience, the better. Being able to ask basic questions and not worry about being judged is possibly the most important weapon you can have in your arsenal when assaulting Hollywood.<br />
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<p>But what if you can&#8217;t find someone who sparks to your talent and actually offers their assistance as an ongoing mentor? Do not walk away! I&#8217;ve had great success taking whatever nuggets get kicked my way by *anyone* with more experience than me.</p>
<p>Example: a family friend has been writing for TV since the late 80s. His resumé was full of Top Ten shows before he created a seminal 90s series that won tons of awards and launched him into the ridiculously-lucrative world of script doctoring.</p>
<p>Unfortunately, he made it clear when we first met that he had little time to help me &#8211; but he agreed to read my woefully-underdeveloped (at the time) Office spec. He gave me some great notes but &#8211; more importantly &#8211; he gave me some strong advice:</p>
<p>&#8220;I know a lot of talented writers who can&#8217;t get arrested right now. But I also know a lot of medium talents who are so persistent they never *stopped* working. So don&#8217;t give up.&#8221;</p>
<p>That was exactly what I needed to hear and I&#8217;ve used persistence to land more than one job since then. Would he say he was mentoring me? Of course not. Do I consider him a mentor? Of course &#8211; just an unknowing one.</p>
<p>And that&#8217;s what I&#8217;m trying to get across &#8211; just because you can&#8217;t get someone to sign up 100%, doesn&#8217;t mean you can&#8217;t glean genius from whatever they&#8217;ll toss your way. I hit this guy up with an &#8220;update email&#8221; every six months to stay on his radar. And, as I grow, that relationship could potentially send back massive rewards. But, if it doesn&#8217;t, I still got some great forward momentum from the time he *was* willing to give me.</p>
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